Monday 9 October 2017

Studio brief 2 crit feedback

For Studio brief 2 I was set the task to design 5 logo types; I based them on Rana Begum's Occasional Geometries exhibition at the Yorkshire sculpture park. 

After designing the 5 logo types, we were split into groups of 8 in order to have a group crit session. In the session I talked through each design while being given feedback throughout from my peers and tutor. The feedback I received was both positive and negative; the areas that need improving are the refinement of each idea, choosing my favourite one to develop more into a final piece and to use the full work 'Occasional Geometries' instead of the shortened version 'OG' 




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